Monday, January 30, 2012

More like the Bermuda Triangle

Fueled by anger, determination, and maybe one too many cups of tea I can finally say I finished my reading for my American history class tomorrow. It took me 8 full hours of concentration, and I for one couldn't be more proud of myself. You might be wondering why I decided to read it all last night, and well into the wee hours of this morning. Well, it's not like I really chose to do it.

I ordered my book from Amazon. I saved like $5 or something, but ended up sacrificing valuable time waiting for the The Triangle to find its way to my apartment. It arrived the same day Zach did, so needless to say I didn't read the book until after he left. I take full responsibility for bad time management.


That being said someone needs to take full responsibility in writing one of the worst planned out books I have ever had the displeasure of reading. The Triangle: The Fire That Changed America by David Von Drehle might have been a New York Times Book Review Notable Book, but I disagree with that statement.

The critics comments rave of the amazing story of the "long-forgotten tale", and I did enjoy learning the history behind the Triangle factory. To give you a better idea of what the book is about I have taken the liberty to type out the summary on the back of the book:

'In one of the most honored books of the year, David Von Drehle transports us to a beautiful spring day in March 1911 when 146 workers - most of them young immigrant women - lost their lives. Employees had just begun preparing to leave the Triangle shirtwaist factory in New York's Greenwich Village when a fire broke out and within minutes consumed the building's upper three stories. It was the worst disaster in New York City until 9/11.'

No where in the summary does the story warn you of the seemingly endless back stories of characters in the book that don't add anything to the story other than worthless pages. While some might find it interesting to read the back stories of immigrant workers who died as well as how the corrupt lawyer came to be they have no place in a novel. I understand this book was based off history, but there were many parts of the book that were pointless to the actual story.

The Triangle factory was located on the
8th, 9th, and 10th floors of the building.
Back then fire crews could only successfully
fight a fires from the 6th floor and below. 
These flashbacks of the former lives of characters would've been better suited it the author would relate why their backgrounds were so important to the story. He did do this for one of the characters, but after reading the book it didn't make since for the other 20. Von Drehle would lead you off into one direction and then abruptly stop and begin another story that is no where near relatable to the one he had just ended. It seemed as though the author lost reasoning behind his stories just like boats and aircrafts mysteriously vanish in the Bermuda Triangle.

I will say that I was impressed by the descriptions he used when telling the story, but he used too many pointless descriptions. He would also proceed to repeat himself often with information that wasn't vital to the storyline.

I also would like to take this time out point out another flaw to the summary on the back cover. While the summary and title of the book give the reader the impression the story will be mainly about a fire it's not. In fact, the first one-hundred or so pages has nothing to do with flames. It provides the history of the industry, which I'll admit is important only 24 pages were actually devoted to the fire itself. The other 224 pages consisted of the history before the fire and the worker strikes leading up to it as well as the hearings, fallout, and reform that took place after that. Oh and let's not forget about 112 of those pages include useless backstories that should be reserved for a more appropriate book where the stories will have more meaning, instead of a novel.

I wouldn't necessarily recommend the book for anyone to read, however I do believe that everyone should take the time and research (or at least google) the Triangle fire. I found the history behind it quite interesting. Perhaps I might even write a little summary of my own after some sleep and time to relax.

After scanning the opening of the book for some information just now I would like to tell every DO NOT READ THIS BOOK! The first page opens with a story that has no direct relevance to the story itself. The author already begins to plague the book with five characters who are not only unessential to the story line, but cloud the reader with details that confuse the reader from the start.

I agree with the Bob Woodward. The book does cover "an amazing, long-forgotten tale," and that this is a part of history that needs to be told. But that doesn't mean David Von Drehle should be the one telling it.

Love, bear

P.S. When I say that the back stories are not important/relevant I mean that they are not important/relevant to the novel. The victims of the fire suffered a terrible fate, and each of them is played an important role in changing laws to create safer work enviornments. There stories are very important for the history aspect of the Triangle fire; they just don't hold any significant merit to the novel itself.

Saturday, January 28, 2012

Firsts to lasts and everything in between

Today not only marks my first day of work, but it also marks the last day I will spend with Zach for a long time.

Zach came to Mizzou on Thursday. We started his trip with some food from D. Rowes. I figured it was the perfect place to eat. Not only was it a Columbia restaurant, but my roommate Stevee also works there. She wasn't working when we went in, but it was still fun to show him where she works. Let's not forget the food there is pretty good too. We went to Whiskey Wild that night, and made it home in time to catch a few zzzz's and be ready for class tomorrow.

Zach, Stevee, and I went to class. It was pretty cool having him in all my classes, and I think he had fun seeing how different our schools are. I mean for one our campus is like 4 times the size; not including our off-campus housing.

We went out that night to a party. It was pretty fun, and everyone had a great time the only problems was the it started snowing, and then it started getting icy. People were slipping everywhere but only Ashley managed to fall.

After a late night out I got ready for my first day of work, and it wasn't that bad. I made a few mistakes, but it wasn't awful. And I didn't cry. I go back tomorrow, so I guess that means it's time to hit the hay.

Love, bear

Thursday, January 26, 2012

Picking up zach

That's right. Zach will be here for the next three days. Yay!

Love, bear

Monday, January 23, 2012

This has got to be the good life.

I say that now. I can't remember feeling this good in a long time. I have a new job that I start tomorrow. I just arrived back from an amazing trip to Australia. And school has started off on a very good note. I can't help wondering when will it end.

My guess is Valentine's Day. The one holiday devoted to couples professing their love to each other. Kill me now.

Well, until then I plan on living it up. I'm actually very excited for my best guy friend to come visit me this Thursday. Yes, Zach will be in Columbia to celebrate Australia Day with me. I really can't wait. But for now Sex and the City is calling my name.

Love, bear

P.S. I'm sorry. I know that I haven't been updated this blog very much. I'll try to be more adamant about that and more detailed in my postings.

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

First day of 2nd semester

It's always an interesting day. There is so much potential. I don't know if I've ever had a better first day than I did today. Not only did I only have one class, but I also got an interview for a job at Chipotle. I hope I get it. My old roommate Ashley works there and it should be fun. I also finished my paper that I have due for Thursday already done. I would write more, but I need to get up for a 10 AM class.